ADDiCTiVECARMEL

ADDiCTiVECARMEL | 0Hi0, United States

WiLL U L0VE ME WHEN...

3/17/2007 | 1130 views | Category: General Poems | Tags: Love Poem,

B0i i G0T iSSUES
THAT U W0NT BELiEVE
i G0T AN ATTiTUDE PR0BLEM DAT BARELY
SH0Wz BUT JUS PRESS MY BUTT0Nz
&& I WiLL BL0W!!
WiLL U STiLL L0VE DEN?
WEN i JUS WAKE
AN 0LD BANDANNA 0N MA HEAD
&& N0 MAKEUP 0N MY FACE?
WHAT AB0UT WEN i GET EM0Ti0NAL
&& SENSiTiVE DURiN DAT TiME 0F DA M0NTH?
WEN i GET AN ADDiTUDE CUZ U DiDNT CALL BACK?
&& DEN U WANNA START KiSSiN && I PUT 0N AN
’MY HEAD HURTz’ ACT
WiLL U L0VE ME DEN?
WEN iM AT MY W0RST
WEN I GET M00DY && SELFiSH
&& SEEM UNC0NCERNED?
WHAT AB0UT WEN iM STRESSiN U B0UT WERE U BEN?
KN0WiN DAMN WELL U L0VE ME 2MUCH 2C0MMiT
ADULTURY SiN
WAT AB0UT WEN i CL0SE MY SELF FR0M Y0U
CAUSE i FiND iT HARD T0 TRUST
WAT AB0UT THEN?
WiLL U L0VE ME MUCH?
WAT AB0U WEN i SEE TYRESE 0N T.V
LiCK MA LiPz && TRYDA H0LD iN MA SCREAM
WiLL U L0VE ME WEN i SCREAM && WANNA FiGHT
WEN i TELL U NAW B0i N0T 2NiGHT?
WEN i FiND iT HARD TO LET THiNGS G0
&& i LET MY EM0Ti0Nz GET A LiTTLE 0UTTA C0NTR0L?
CUz i G0TTA BAd SiDE && i 0NLY FiND iT FAiR
T0 LET CHU KN0
WiLL U L0VE ME DEN?
iF N0T LET ME G0

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